E9 G - Describe characters with text evidence

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E9 G - Describe characters with text evidence

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E9 G - Describe characters with text evidence

Mini-Beschreibung: Describe a character’s behaviour, feelings and relationships. Support your ideas with short text evidence or clear paraphrases.

Zielgruppe: Englisch als erste Fremdsprache, Klasse 9, Baden-Württemberg, G-Niveau.

Sprachmodus E9-G: kurze zusammenhängende Texte, häufige Wörter, klare Struktur, starker Kontext, moderates Tempo, gezielte Wiederholung und Hilfen. Kommunikation ist wichtiger als perfekte Fehlerfreiheit.

Media start – Look, think, speak:

1. Look at the faces. Choose one simple feeling word: happy, worried, angry, surprised, sad.
2. Say: I think the person feels ... because ...
3. Ask a partner: What makes you think that?
4. Important: A face is a clue, not proof. In a text, you need words, actions or other evidence.

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Fortfahren Ausblenden

Watch first, then use it: Watch a short part without stopping. What can show a character: what a person says, thinks, does or how others react? Watch again and write down two useful ideas. Use English captions only after your first viewing if you need them.

Your learning path

English first → understand → respond → ask → hint → improve → use again

1. Understand: Read or watch a short scene.
2. Respond: Say one idea about a character.
3. Ask: Ask for a reason or evidence.
4. Hint: Use a word bank or sentence starter.
5. Improve: Add one reason, example or better word.
6. Use again: Apply the same pattern to a new character.

I-can goals

By the end of this aiMOOC, you can say:

1. I can describe behaviour: Maya helps Leo.
2. I can describe feelings: Leo seems nervous.
3. I can describe a relationship: Maya and Leo start to trust each other.
4. I can use evidence: She says, “You can sit here.”
5. I can paraphrase: Maya offers Leo a seat.
6. I can explain a reason: She seems kind because she supports him.
7. I can react and ask: I agree because ... / What is your evidence?
8. I can improve my answer: from one word to a short, clear explanation.

Vorwissen

Quick check – no dictionary first.

1. What is a character in a story?
2. What is a feeling?
3. What is the difference between what a person does and what a person is like?
4. Finish: I think this character is ... because ...
5. Ask: Which words in the text show that?

Hint: You do not need difficult literary terms. Start with what you can see in the text.

Key idea: claim + evidence + explanation

A strong short character answer has three parts:

Part	Simple question	Example
Claim	What do I think?	Maya is helpful.
Evidence	What in the text supports this?	She says, “You can sit here.”
Explanation	Why does this fit?	She notices that Leo is alone and helps him.

Easy formula:

Character + seems/is + word + because + evidence.

Example: Leo seems nervous because his voice is quiet and he says he does not know anyone.

Behaviour, feelings and relationships

Focus	Ask yourself	Useful words
Behaviour	What does the character do or say?	helps, waits, asks, leaves, smiles, avoids, supports
Feelings	How may the character feel?	happy, worried, nervous, calm, angry, relieved, unsure
Relationships	How do two characters treat each other?	friendly, distant, supportive, tense, respectful, trusting

Remember: A feeling can change quickly. A character trait is usually more stable.

Example: Leo feels nervous now. This does not automatically mean: Leo is always a nervous person.

Listening and viewing

Listening rule: First listen. Then listen again. Read the transcript only after your first listening attempt.

Partner or teacher reading – two speakers, moderate speed:

Before listening, answer: Who may need help?

After the first listening:

1. Who sounds worried?
2. Who offers support?
3. What changes by the end?

After the second listening, complete: B feels ... because ...

<details> <summary>Transcript – open only after listening</summary> A: Are you okay?
B: I’m not sure about the presentation.
A: We can practise once together.
B: Really? That would help.
A: Sure. Start with the first sentence.
B: Okay. Thanks. </details>

Check: B seems worried at first. A is supportive. By the end, B accepts the help.

Viewing task

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Fortfahren Ausblenden

Watch for one simple idea: A character trait needs evidence.

Do not try to understand every word. Listen for:

1. trait
2. evidence
3. actions
4. words

Then say one sentence: A good character description uses ...

Reading: The Last Seat

The following short scene is fictional and created for this course.

At lunch, Maya sees Leo standing near the classroom door. He is new at the school. He looks at the full tables and keeps his hands in his pockets. Maya moves her bag from the chair next to her.

“You can sit here,” she says.

Leo smiles, but his voice is quiet. “Thanks. I don’t really know anyone yet.”

Maya asks him about his first week. Leo says science is okay, but group work is hard because he is afraid of making mistakes in English. Maya does not laugh. She says, “We can work together tomorrow if you want.”

Later, when a classmate jokes about Leo’s accent, Maya says, “Give him time. He is learning.”

Leo looks at her and says, “Thanks for saying that.” On the way back to class, he walks beside Maya instead of behind the group.

= First reading: understand

Do not analyse everything yet.

1. Who is new at the school?
2. Where are Maya and Leo?
3. What does Maya offer?
4. What problem does Leo mention?
5. What happens on the way back to class?

= Second reading: find evidence

Use three colours if possible:

1. Mark one action that shows Maya’s behaviour.
2. Mark one detail that shows Leo’s feeling.
3. Mark one detail that shows their relationship changing.

Possible evidence:

1. Maya moves her bag from the chair.
2. his voice is quiet
3. We can work together tomorrow
4. he walks beside Maya

Model analysis

Question: What is Maya like?

Short answer: Maya is helpful and supportive. She offers Leo a seat and asks about his first week. She also says, “Give him time.” This shows that she wants to support Leo when another student makes a joke.

Why this works:

1. It gives a clear idea.
2. It uses short evidence.
3. It explains the evidence.
4. It does not retell the whole story.

Quote or paraphrase?

A short quote uses the exact words from the text.

Example: Maya says, “You can sit here.”

A paraphrase gives the same idea in your own words.

Example: Maya offers Leo a place next to her.

Use a quote when a few exact words are strong and useful. Use a paraphrase when you can explain the action more simply.

Do not copy long parts of a text. Choose only the words you need.

Context vocabulary

Word	Simple English meaning	Useful example
behaviour	what a person does	His behaviour changes.
feeling	an emotion at one moment	She feels worried.
trait	a quality of a person	He is helpful.
relationship	how people connect and treat each other	Their relationship becomes friendlier.
evidence	text detail that supports an idea	My evidence is his quiet voice.
quote	exact words from the text	“You can sit here.”
paraphrase	the same idea in your own words	She offers him a seat.
supportive	ready to help or encourage	Maya is supportive.
nervous	worried and not relaxed	Leo seems nervous.
trust	to feel safe with someone	Leo starts to trust Maya.

Use the words in context. Do not learn the list only.

Pronunciation and fluency

Goal: understandable English, not accent-free English.

Say these words slowly, then in a sentence:

1. HELP-ful → Maya is helpful.
2. NER-vous → Leo seems nervous.
3. EV-i-dence → My evidence is ...
4. re-LA-tion-ship → Their relationship changes.
5. be-CAUSE → He is worried because ...

Fluency chunk:

I think / Leo feels nervous / because / his voice is quiet.

Read it once slowly. Read it again in larger chunks. Then look away and say it from memory.

Speaking

Pair talk – 60 to 90 seconds.

Student A: I think Maya is ... because ...

Student B: What is your evidence?

Student A: The text says ... / The text shows ...

Student B: I agree because ... or I see it differently because ...

Then change roles and talk about Leo.

Follow-up questions:

1. How does Leo feel?
2. Why do you think so?
3. How does their relationship change?
4. Which detail is strongest for you?

Writing

Task: Write 5–7 clear sentences about one character.

Choose Maya or Leo.

Writing frame:

[Name] seems/is ... . At first, ... . The text says/shows ... . This shows that ... . The relationship with ... is ... because ... . By the end, ... .

G-level target: clear idea + short evidence + simple explanation.

Better, not longer: Weak: Maya is nice. Better: Maya is supportive because she offers Leo a seat and defends him.

Functional grammar

Focus on only a few useful accuracy goals.

Simple present for text analysis

Use: Maya helps Leo. Leo seems nervous. The text shows that Maya is supportive.

Avoid changing to past just because the story happened earlier.

Adjective after be or seem

Correct: Maya is helpful. Leo seems nervous.

Not: Maya is helpfully.

because + reason

Leo is nervous because he does not know many people.

Maya seems supportive because she offers help.

Keep the sentence short if needed.

Mediation – optional and guided

Situation: A German-speaking classmate asks what you learned about Leo. Give the key idea in simple English. Do not translate every sentence.

German prompt: Leo ist neu, unsicher beim Englischsprechen und beginnt Maya zu vertrauen.

Possible English response: Leo is new at the school and feels unsure about his English. Maya supports him, so he starts to trust her.

Mediation goal: pass on the important message, not every word.

Help levels

Help 1 – Word bank

helpful – nervous – friendly – unsure – supportive – calm – distant – trusting

Help 2 – Sentence starters

I think ... He/She seems ... My evidence is ... The text says ... This shows ... Their relationship is ... because ...

Help 3 – Build your answer

1. Name one feeling or trait.
2. Add one action or short quote.
3. Explain with because.
4. Add one sentence about the relationship.

Feedback

Use Two strengths + one next step.

Partner feedback:

1. Strength 1: I understand your main idea.
2. Strength 2: You use useful evidence.
3. Next step: Add a reason / use a shorter quote / explain the relationship.

Useful feedback language: Your idea is clear. This evidence fits well. Can you explain why? Can you use a shorter quote?

Do not rewrite your partner’s whole text. Help them improve their own text.

Error analysis

Problem	Better version	Why
Maya is helpfully.	Maya is helpful.	After is, use an adjective.
Leo nervous because he is new.	Leo is nervous because he is new.	The sentence needs is.
Maya is nice.	Maya is supportive because she offers help.	Add a precise word and evidence.
The quote is very long.	Use only the useful words.	Short evidence is easier to explain.
I know Leo is shy.	Leo seems unsure because his voice is quiet.	Stay close to the evidence.

Important: One error does not make the whole answer bad. Fix the error that helps communication most.

Transfer: a new mini-scene

Fictional scene:

Sam has prepared the group poster. When Noor arrives late, Sam points at the empty section and says, “You can still add your part.” Noor looks down and says, “Sorry. The bus was late.” Sam waits while Noor writes. At the end, Noor smiles and says, “Thanks for not being angry.”

Your task:

1. Describe Sam’s behaviour.
2. Describe Noor’s feeling.
3. Describe their relationship.
4. Use one short quote or one paraphrase.
5. Add one because sentence.

Can-do check

Mark: yes – almost – not yet

I can ...	yes	almost	not yet
name a character’s behaviour
describe a feeling
describe a relationship
use a short quote
paraphrase evidence
explain with because
ask for evidence
improve my first answer

If you mark not yet, use one help level and try the transfer task again.

Safe and responsible media and AI use

1. Use fictional names and fictional profile data in school tasks.
2. Do not use private social-media posts or personal data of real people.
3. Audio or video recordings should be voluntary and kept private unless everyone clearly agrees to another use.
4. Do not upload classmates’ work, voices or images without permission.
5. External AI tools are not needed for this course.
6. If AI gives feedback, check the facts, the source and the language yourself.
7. Keep your own original text. Improve it instead of replacing it completely with AI text.
8. For pronunciation, aim for clear and understandable speech, not for copying one “perfect” accent.
9. Avoid cultural stereotypes when describing characters.

Media check

The Wikimedia Commons files used here are reusable under the licence shown on each file page. Check attribution and licence details before reusing them outside MOOCwiki.

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2. Two young people demonstrating a lively conversation.jpg
3. Character friends.JPG
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5. Speaking.svg

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Folgekurs

Next step: E9 G – Compare two characters with evidence

You will use the same pattern: idea → evidence → explanation

Then you compare: Both characters ... , but ...

Interaktive Aufgaben

Quiz: Teste Dein Wissen

What makes a short character statement stronger? (A clear idea with matching text evidence) (!A long summary without evidence) (!A difficult word without explanation) (!A personal guess only)

Which sentence describes a feeling? (Leo feels nervous.) (!Leo has brown hair.) (!Leo is a student.) (!Leo stands near a door.)

Which detail best supports the idea that Maya is helpful? (She offers Leo a seat.) (!She is at school.) (!She eats lunch.) (!She sees a classroom door.)

Which detail suggests that Leo feels unsure? (His voice is quiet.) (!He likes science.) (!He walks to class.) (!He is called Leo.)

Which sentence describes a relationship? (Maya and Leo start to trust each other.) (!Maya moves her bag.) (!Leo is new.) (!Lunch takes place at school.)

What is a paraphrase? (The same idea in your own words) (!A very long direct quote) (!A list of difficult words) (!A translation of every sentence)

Which sentence uses because correctly? (Leo is nervous because he does not know many people.) (!Leo because nervous he is new.) (!Because Leo nervous many people.) (!Leo is because new nervous.)

What is usually best when using a quote as evidence? (Use only the short part you need.) (!Copy the whole page.) (!Use a quote without explaining it.) (!Choose a quote that does not match your idea.)

Which question is useful in a speaking task? (What is your evidence?) (!What is every word in German?) (!Can we skip the text?) (!Can I copy your whole answer?)

Which is a safe way to use media or AI in this course? (Check sources and keep private data private.) (!Upload classmates’ voices without asking.) (!Use private social-media posts as character evidence.) (!Replace your own text completely without checking it.)

Memory

Behaviour	what a character does
Feeling	an emotion at one moment
Evidence	a supporting text detail
Paraphrase	the same idea in your own words
Relationship	how characters treat each other
Supportive	ready to help or encourage

Drag and Drop

Ordne die richtigen Begriffe zu.	Thema
helpful	offers another person a seat
nervous	speaks in a quiet voice and feels unsure
supportive	helps someone after a mistake or problem
trusting	feels safer with another person
evidence	a short detail from the text

Kreuzworträtsel

Evidence	What supports your idea with a text detail?
Feeling	What word means an emotion at one moment?
Behaviour	What word means what a character does?
Relationship	What word describes how people connect and treat each other?
Paraphrase	What means giving the same idea in your own words?
Helpful	Which adjective describes a person who gives useful support?

Lückentext

Vervollständige den Text.

A character’s is what the character does or says.

A is an emotion at one moment.

Text supports an idea about a character.

A short exact part of a text is a .

A gives the same idea in your own words.

Maya seems because she offers Leo help.

Leo seems because his voice is quiet.

A describes how two characters connect and treat each other.

The word helps you add a reason.

A good answer includes a claim, evidence and an .

Offene Aufgaben

Leicht

1. Feeling cards: Choose five feeling words and create a small card for each. Add one simple example sentence.
2. Evidence hunt: Find three short details in The Last Seat and write what each detail may show.
3. Pair talk: Use the speaking frame with a partner for one minute. Ask at least one follow-up question.
4. Quote or paraphrase: Turn three short quotes from the reading into simple paraphrases.

Standard

1. Character paragraph: Write 5–7 sentences about Maya or Leo. Use one quote, one paraphrase and one because-sentence.
2. Relationship line: Create a simple before-and-after diagram showing how Maya and Leo’s relationship changes.
3. Listening remake: Write a new six-line dialogue in which one character is worried and another gives support. Read it aloud with a partner.
4. Peer feedback: Give a partner two strengths and one next step. Then revise your own text without deleting the first version.

Schwer

1. Compare characters: Compare Maya and Sam from the transfer text. Use at least two pieces of evidence.
2. Mini presentation: Give a 60–90 second talk about one character. Explain behaviour, feeling and relationship.
3. Point of view: Rewrite the lunch scene in 100–130 words from Leo’s point of view. Keep the events the same.
4. Media character clues: Choose a freely licensed image from Wikimedia Commons and describe what the body language may suggest. Add a warning that visual clues are not proof of a person’s real feelings.

Lernkontrolle

1. New evidence: Read a new short scene chosen by your teacher. Make one claim about a character and support it with two different details.
2. Best support: Compare two possible pieces of evidence for the same character statement. Explain which one fits more directly and why.
3. Relationship change: Explain how a relationship changes from the start to the end of a short scene. Use one action from each part.
4. Improve an answer: Improve the sentence He is nice. Add a more precise word, evidence and a reason.
5. Evidence without copying: Turn a useful sentence from a text into a paraphrase and explain why your version still keeps the original meaning.
6. Respond and ask: Give a short spoken character statement, react to a partner’s different idea and ask one evidence question.

Lernnachweis

For a successful learning record, you should show that you can:

1. understand the main idea of a short character scene
2. name behaviour, feelings and relationships
3. choose short and relevant text evidence
4. use a short quote correctly
5. paraphrase a text detail in your own simple English
6. explain your idea with because
7. react to another idea and ask for evidence
8. revise your own answer after feedback
9. keep your language clear and understandable
10. work safely with media, recordings and optional AI feedback

A suitable final product is a short written character analysis plus a 60–90 second oral explanation. A recording is optional and should stay private unless all people involved agree to another use.

OERs zum Thema

The article gives background on literary characterization. For this G-level course, focus on the simpler course pattern: behaviour + feeling + relationship + evidence.

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Charakterisierung Literarische Figur Textbeleg Paraphrase Leseverstehen Hörverstehen Sprechen Schreiben Mediation Feedback