E7 M - Write a short story with structure

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E7 M - Write a short story with structure

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E7 M - Write a short story with structure

Mini-description: Plan and write a short story with a clear opening, an event/problem and an ending. Use past simple for key events and past continuous for background actions.

Media start – look first, then write: What could happen on a rainy afternoon? Think of one character, one place and one surprising event. Write three English keywords before you read on.

I can ...

Goal	I can ...
Structure	organise a short story into opening, event/problem and ending.
Tenses	use past simple for events and past continuous for background actions.
Language	connect ideas with words such as when, while, suddenly, then, finally.
Writing	draft, check and improve a short story of about 120–160 words.

Before you start

Try first: Complete the ideas in English.

1. A story needs ...
2. A useful past tense is ...
3. A word for a sudden change is ...

Hint: Think of structure, time and linking words.

German help if needed: Eine kurze Geschichte braucht einen klaren Anfang, ein Ereignis oder Problem und ein Ende. Du musst nicht jedes Wort übersetzen.

Notice: story structure

A short story is easier to follow when each part has a job.

Part	Job	Useful questions
Opening	Set the scene.	Who? Where? When?
Event / problem	Something changes.	What happened? Why is it a problem?
Ending	Finish the action.	How was the problem solved? How did the character feel?

Try: Choose one image idea: a backpack, a rainy street or an empty corridor. Say one sentence for each story part.

Listening and viewing

Watch part of this BBC Learning English lesson. Listen for ways to start a story, use story tenses and connect events.

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Viewing task: Note down three useful expressions. Then tell a partner which one you could use in your own story.

Hint: You do not need to understand every word. Focus on repeated examples and key phrases.

Reading: The blue backpack

Read once for the story. Read again for the tenses.

Opening: It was Friday afternoon. Leo was waiting for the bus while heavy rain was falling. Most people were hurrying home. Then he noticed a blue backpack under the bench.

Event / problem: Leo picked it up and looked for a name tag. While he was checking the outside pocket, the bus arrived. The doors opened, but Leo did not get on. Suddenly, a girl ran around the corner and shouted, “Wait!” She looked worried and pointed at the backpack.

Ending: Leo held it up. “Is this yours?” he asked. The girl smiled and nodded. She thanked him, and they both caught the next bus. Leo arrived home later than usual, but he felt good about his decision.

Quick check: What is the problem? Which sentence changes the direction of the story?

Vocabulary in context

Word or phrase	Meaning from context	Use it
notice	become aware of something	I noticed ...
pick up	lift something from a place	She picked up ...
look worried	show that you are nervous or concerned	He looked worried because ...
suddenly	unexpectedly and quickly	Suddenly, ...
catch the bus	get on the bus before it leaves	We caught ...
finally	at the end	Finally, ...

Mini-transfer: Replace one phrase in the model story with a different phrase from the table.

Grammar for storytelling

Past simple = key events.

Leo noticed a backpack. The bus arrived. A girl ran around the corner.

Past continuous = background or an action already in progress.

Leo was waiting for the bus. Rain was falling.

Use both together:

While Leo was checking the bag, the bus arrived.

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Try: Complete the pattern with your own idea: “While I was ..., ... happened.”

Direct feedback: If the longer background action is in past continuous and the shorter event is in past simple, your tense choice fits the pattern.

Controlled E-outlook: past perfect

You may sometimes meet the past perfect when one past event happened before another: “By the time the bus left, Mia had found her bag.”

For this course, you do not need past perfect in your own story. Focus on past simple and past continuous.

Pronunciation

Regular -ed endings do not all sound the same.

Example	Ending sound
watched	/t/
played	/d/
wanted	/ɪd/

Try aloud: watched – played – wanted. Then read one sentence from your story clearly. Verständlichkeit ist wichtiger als Akzentfreiheit.

Speaking

Work with a partner.

1. Tell your story idea in about 30–45 seconds.
2. Your partner asks one question: What happened next? or Why did the character ...?
3. Answer and give one short reason.
4. Swap roles.

Support: First ..., while ..., suddenly ..., so ..., finally ...

Writing: plan → draft → improve

Task: Write a short story of about 120–160 words.

Step	Your job
Plan	Note character, place, opening, event/problem and ending.
Draft	Write the story. Keep moving; do not stop for every small mistake.
Check	Underline past simple once and past continuous once.
Improve	Add one useful linker and one detail that makes the scene clearer.

Writing frame if needed:

Opening: “It was ... and ... was/were ...”

Event/problem: “While ..., suddenly ...”

Ending: “In the end, ... Finally, ...”

Feedback

Use this short peer check.

Check	Yes / almost / not yet
I can find the opening.
I can identify the event or problem.
The ending closes the story.
Past simple tells the main events.
Past continuous gives background where useful.
Linkers make the order clear.

Feedback sentence starters: “I liked ... because ...” – “One part was very clear: ...” – “You could improve ... by ...”

After feedback, change at least two things in your story.

Optional mediation

Explain to a German-speaking classmate what makes the model story easy to follow. Give the three main points in German, but do not translate the story sentence by sentence.

Safe media and AI use

Recordings are voluntary and should stay private unless everyone involved agrees to sharing them. Do not upload personal social-media data. If you use AI feedback, check whether the language fits your level and whether the suggestion is correct. Keep your own ideas and wording; AI should support revision, not replace your text.

Self-check

Rate yourself: ✓ = yes, ~ = partly, ? = I need help.

1. I can plan three story parts.
2. I can use past simple for main events.
3. I can use past continuous for background.
4. I can link events clearly.
5. I can improve a draft after feedback.

Next step: If you have three or more ✓, write a new story from a different picture without the writing frame.

Interaktive Aufgaben

Quiz: Teste Dein Wissen

Which part introduces character, place and time? (Opening) (!Ending) (!Title only) (!Dialogue only)

Which part contains the main change or difficulty? (Event or problem) (!Opening) (!Word list) (!Final punctuation)

Which tense usually tells the main completed events in a story? (Past simple) (!Present continuous) (!Future with will) (!Present perfect only)

Which tense is useful for an action already in progress in the past? (Past continuous) (!Present simple) (!Going to future) (!Imperative)

Which sentence uses the two story tenses well? (While Leo was waiting, the bus arrived.) (!While Leo waits, the bus arrived.) (!While Leo will wait, the bus arrives.) (!While Leo waited, the bus is arriving.)

Which linker is useful for a sudden event? (Suddenly) (!Usually) (!Tomorrow) (!Never)

What should an ending do? (Close the main action) (!Introduce every character) (!Start a new unrelated problem) (!Remove all past tenses)

What is a useful first step before drafting? (Plan the three story parts) (!Translate every sentence) (!Write the ending ten times) (!Avoid all notes)

What is useful peer feedback? (Name one strength and one clear improvement) (!Rewrite the whole story for your partner) (!Only say good) (!Only count words)

What should AI do in this writing task? (Support checking and revision) (!Replace your own story) (!Upload your private data) (!Decide every idea for you)

Memory

Opening	character, place and time
Event	important action
Problem	difficulty in the story
Ending	final result
Past simple	completed main action
Past continuous	background action in progress

Drag and Drop

Ordne die richtigen Begriffe zu.	Thema
Opening	Set the scene
Background	Show what was happening
Event	Move the action forward
Problem	Create a difficulty
Ending	Close the action

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Kreuzworträtsel

Opening	Which story part sets the scene?
Problem	What creates a difficulty for the character?
Ending	Which story part closes the action?
Suddenly	Which linker can introduce an unexpected event?
Background	What does the past continuous often describe?
Feedback	What helps you improve a first draft?

Lückentext

Vervollständige den Text.

A short story often begins with an . The main change can be an event or a . Completed key events are usually told in the . A background action in progress can use the . The linker can introduce an unexpected event. A clear closes the main action. After feedback, a writer should the first draft.

Offene Aufgaben

Leicht

1. Picture opening: Choose one Commons image from this course and write a 30-word opening.
2. Linker hunt: Find five useful linking words in the course and use three in new sentences.
3. Event chain: Write five completed events that could happen after school.
4. Background line: Write four background sentences beginning with “While ...”.

Standard

1. Three-part plan: Plan a new story with opening, event/problem and ending. Use only keywords first.
2. Tell it first: Tell your plan to a partner for 45 seconds. React to one question and change one idea.
3. 120–160 word story: Write a complete short story and use at least three linkers.
4. Two-change revision: Exchange stories, give one strength and one improvement, then revise two places.

Schwer

1. Change the viewpoint: Rewrite one paragraph from another character’s point of view without changing the main events.
2. Media prompt: Use the rain or campfire image to create atmosphere through two sensory details.
3. Compare drafts: Compare your first and final draft and explain three improvements in English.
4. Story reading: Give a short reading of your story. Recording is optional and private; focus on clear meaning and pacing.

Lernkontrolle

1. Repair the structure: You receive a story in mixed order. Put the parts in a logical sequence and explain two decisions.
2. Choose by function: Explain why one sentence needs past simple and another needs past continuous, then write a similar pair.
3. Improve coherence: Add suitable linkers to a short text and explain how they change the flow.
4. Transfer to a new image: Write a new 100–130 word story from an unfamiliar picture without using the model story.
5. Revision decision: Read two peer suggestions, choose the more useful one and explain why before revising the paragraph.
6. Explain the method: Explain in German how an English learner can plan and improve a short story without translating every sentence.

Lernnachweis

Für einen Lernnachweis ist wichtig:

1. eine erkennbare Struktur aus opening, event/problem und ending
2. verständliche und zusammenhängende Handlung
3. funktionaler Einsatz von past simple und past continuous
4. passende linking words
5. Wortschatz, der zur Situation passt
6. ein überarbeiteter Text mit sichtbaren Verbesserungen
7. kurze Reflexion über eigenes Feedback und nächste Lernschritte

Verknüpfte Lernbereiche

Englisch schreiben Creative Writing Short Story Past Simple Past Continuous Linking Words Speaking Peer-Feedback Medienkompetenz

Folgekurs

Weiter mit E7 M - Improve a story with details and dialogue: Add stronger details, short dialogue and clearer reactions while keeping your story structure easy to follow.