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E7 G - Make a story more precise with adverbs

Mini description: Add a few useful adverbs to a short story or description. Make actions clearer, not longer than needed.

Level: English as a first foreign language, Year 7, G-level, Baden-Württemberg.

Course rule: English first → try → use the picture or context → take a hint → use short German help only if you still need it.

Learning path: Notice → understand → try → use → communicate → feedback → improve → use again.

Media start: What do you notice?

Look for 20 seconds. Then say one short sentence.

Model: The dog runs quickly.

Try: Change only the adverb: The dog runs ______.

Word bank: quickly · slowly · happily

Hint: The verb is runs. Ask: How does it run?

Deutsch-Hilfe, nur wenn nötig: Das Adverb sagt hier, wie etwas passiert.

I can ...

I can ...	My goal
add 3–5 useful adverbs to a short story	□
choose an adverb that fits an action	□
put a simple adverb in a clear place in the sentence	□
read my story so other people can understand it	□

What you already know

You can already use short sentences with a subject and a verb.

Examples: Mia walks. The dog runs. Sam closes the door.

You also know many adjectives: slow, quick, quiet, careful.

Today you use some of them as adverbs: slowly, quickly, quietly, carefully.

Input: A short story becomes more precise

First read:

Mia walked to school. It started to rain. A dog ran across the path. Mia stopped. She crossed the road. At school, she closed the door.

Second read:

Mia walked slowly to school. Suddenly, it started to rain. A dog ran across the path. Mia stopped quickly. She crossed the road carefully. At school, she closed the door quietly.

Mia is a fictional character. The photo is only a learning prompt.

Notice: The second text has only a few new words. These words make the actions more precise.

What is an adverb here?

In this course, we mostly use adverbs to say how an action happens.

verb + adverb walk slowly · stop quickly · cross carefully · speak quietly

Many adverbs of manner are built with:

adjective + -ly

slow → slowly

quick → quickly

quiet → quietly

careful → carefully

Small watch-out: Not every adverb ends in -ly. fast stays fast. good often becomes well when it describes an action.

Where does the adverb go?

A clear G-level pattern is:

subject + verb + object + adverb

Mia closed the door quietly.

Sam did the task carefully.

With no object:

The dog ran quickly.

Some words can also stand at the start:

Suddenly, it started to rain.

Use this only when it sounds clear. You do not need many adverbs.

Media: See the action, choose the adverb

Try first: Choose one sentence.

They walk slowly.

They walk quickly.

Hint: A still photo cannot always tell you the exact speed. Give a possible description and say I think ....

Model: I think they are walking slowly.

Try: Complete one sentence: The cyclist rides ______.

Word bank: carefully · slowly · safely

Mini-transfer: Which adverb is useful for safety? Explain with one short English sentence.

Listening and viewing

First viewing: Watch about 1:41–3:00 once without subtitles. Do not stop the video. No transcript yet.

Write only two words you hear or see.

Second viewing: Watch the same short part again. Now you may use subtitles.

Task: Complete: An adjective describes ______. An adverb can describe ______.

Hint: Look at the example sentences in the video.

Check: For this course, focus on this difference: an adjective can describe a noun; an adverb can give more information about an action.

Viewing: Where does the adverb go?

Try before the video: Which sentence sounds clear?

A: Mia quietly closed the door.

B: Mia closed the door quietly.

Both can be possible. For this course, start with the simple pattern in B.

Watch: Listen for places where adverbs can stand.

After watching: Improve one sentence from your own work.

Reading: A rainy school morning

Read once without a dictionary.

It was a wet morning. Sam walked slowly to the school gate. A bike moved quickly past him. Sam looked carefully before he crossed the path. He entered the building quietly because a class had already started.

Task 1: Find four adverbs.

Task 2: Match each adverb to the action it makes more precise.

Hint: Underline the verb first.

Check: slowly → walked; quickly → moved; carefully → looked; quietly → entered.

One challenge only: had already started is a short look ahead at the past perfect. You do not need to build this tense in this course. The story focus stays on adverbs.

Vocabulary in context

Word	Simple meaning	Example
slowly	not fast	Walk slowly on a wet path.
quickly	in a fast way	Stop quickly.
quietly	with little sound	Close the door quietly.
carefully	with attention	Look carefully.
suddenly	without warning	Suddenly, it rained.
safely	without danger	Cross safely.

Do not learn a long list. Use the words that fit your story.

Pronunciation

Say these words at a clear, moderate speed:

slowly · quickly · quietly · carefully

Tap the beat of each word. Keep the ending -ly light and clear.

Try: Read one pair.

slow → slowly

quick → quickly

quiet → quietly

Communication goal: Be easy to understand. You do not need to copy one special accent.

Speaking

Work with a partner.

A: What is happening?

B: I think they are walking slowly.

A: Can you make it more precise?

B: They are walking slowly along the path.

Then change roles.

Sentence starters: I think ... · Maybe ... · The person moves ... · The dog runs ...

Feedback: Your partner checks only two things: Is the adverb useful? Is the sentence easy to understand?

Writing: Add only useful adverbs

Step 1 – Plain story:

Write 4–6 short sentences.

Writing frame:

Yesterday, I ...

Then, ...

A person / dog / bike ...

I ...

Finally, ...

Step 2 – Word bank:

slowly · quickly · quietly · carefully · suddenly · safely

Step 3 – Improve:

Add only 3–5 adverbs. Do not add an adverb to every sentence.

Step 4 – Check:

Does the adverb fit the verb?

Does it add useful information?

Can you read the sentence easily?

Direct feedback: Which version is better for the message?

1. The student closed the door.

2. The student closed the door quietly.

If the class is working, sentence 2 gives useful extra information.

Now try:

The dog crossed the path.

The dog crossed the path ______.

Possible feedback: quickly changes the speed. safely changes the idea of danger. Choose the one that fits your story.

Mediation mini-task

Read the short German note:

Es regnet. Geh vorsichtig über den Weg. Schließ die Tür leise.

Tell an English-speaking partner the two most important instructions. Do not translate every word.

Starter: Please ...

Word bank: carefully · quietly

Possible answer: Please cross carefully. Please close the door quietly.

Improve your text

Use this feedback code:

V = I can find the verb.

A = The adverb fits the action.

P = The adverb is in a clear place.

C = The sentence is clear.

A partner marks only one or two places. Then you improve your own text.

Important: Feedback helps you revise. It should not replace your text.

Media and privacy

You may read your story aloud without recording it.

If you record your voice, recording is voluntary and should stay private unless your teacher gives a clear classroom task and you agree.

Do not upload private voice recordings, names, faces, locations or social-media data for this course.

If your class uses an AI tool, write your own first version. Check every suggestion. Keep only language you understand and that fits Year 7 G-level. AI feedback is a hint, not your final text.

Mini-transfer: Use it again

Look at one new scene.

Write two sentences about what could happen next.

Use one verb and one useful adverb in each sentence.

Model: A student parks a bike carefully.

Then remove one adverb. Is the sentence still precise enough? Keep only the adverb that really helps.

Self-check: Can do

I can ...	Not yet	Almost	Yes
add a useful adverb to an action	□	□	□
choose between slowly, quickly, quietly and carefully	□	□	□
use 3–5 adverbs in a short story	□	□	□
improve one sentence after feedback	□	□	□
read my story clearly	□	□	□

One last sentence: Today I can ...

Follow-up course

Next step: Adverbs of frequency in everyday routines with always, often, sometimes, never.

Optional video preview:

Watch only if you are ready for the next small step.

Interaktive Aufgaben

Quiz: Teste Dein Wissen

What does an adverb like quietly tell us in this course? (How an action happens) (!Who does the action) (!Which noun is plural) (!When a school starts)

Which sentence uses an adverb clearly? (Mia closed the door quietly.) (!Mia closed the quietly door.) (!Mia quietly door closed the.) (!Quietly Mia the door.)

Which adverb comes from careful? (carefully) (!careful) (!carefulest) (!carefuling)

Which word best completes The dog ran ___ across the path? (quickly) (!quiet) (!careful) (!happy)

Which word can show that something happens without warning? (suddenly) (!slow) (!door) (!student)

Which word is the adjective in a careful cyclist? (careful) (!carefully) (!cyclingly) (!suddenly)

Which adverb often goes with good when it describes an action? (well) (!goodly) (!gooder) (!goodest)

Which adverb can stay the same as the adjective? (fast) (!carefully) (!slowly) (!quietly)

Which sentence gives useful information about sound? (She spoke quietly.) (!She spoke bicycle.) (!She quiet spoke noun.) (!She spoke yellow.)

What is a good goal for this course? (Use a few adverbs that add useful detail.) (!Add an adverb to every word.) (!Make every sentence very long.) (!Replace all verbs with adjectives.)

Memory

slowly	not fast
quickly	in a fast way
quietly	with little sound
carefully	with attention
suddenly	without warning
safely	without danger

Drag and Drop

Ordne die richtigen Begriffe zu.	Thema
quietly	close the door
carefully	cross a wet path
slowly	walk on slippery ground
quickly	stop before danger
suddenly	start without warning

...

Kreuzworträtsel

carefully	How do you act when you pay close attention?
quietly	How can you close a door with little sound?
slowly	Which adverb is the opposite of quickly in this course?
suddenly	Which adverb means without warning?
quickly	Which adverb means in a fast way?
safely	Which adverb means without danger?

LearningApps

Lückentext

Offene Aufgaben

Leicht

Picture sentence: Choose one course image and write two short English sentences. Add one useful adverb.
Adverb swap: Take the sentence The dog runs quickly. Replace quickly with two different adverbs. Explain how the meaning changes.
Read aloud: Read four model sentences slowly and clearly. Recording is optional and private.
Word bank: Make six small verb-adverb cards, for example walk slowly. Use only words you understand.

Standard

Mini-story: Write 5–6 sentences about a rainy school morning. Add 3–5 useful adverbs.
Partner check: Exchange a text. Mark one useful adverb and one place that could be clearer. The writer decides what to change.
Four-frame story: Draw four simple frames and add one English sentence to each frame. Use adverbs in only two or three frames.
Mediation: Read a short German safety note from your teacher and give the key message in simple English. Do not translate every word.

Schwer

Two versions: Write a plain 6-sentence story and then a more precise version. Explain which three adverbs improved it most.
Story retell: Tell your story to a partner without reading every word. Ask for feedback on clarity and one adverb choice.
Media choice: Choose one free Wikimedia Commons picture for a new story. Check the file page and note the licence before you use it.
Feedback audit: If your class uses an AI tool, compare one AI suggestion with your own sentence. Keep, change or reject it and give one reason. Do not upload private data or let the tool replace your text.

Lernkontrolle

Meaning change: Compare The student closed the door and The student closed the door quietly. Explain when the adverb is useful.
Revision: You receive a 5-sentence story with six adverbs. Remove the adverbs that do not add useful information and explain two decisions.
Picture transfer: Describe a new action picture in three sentences. Use two different adverbs that fit the actions.
Form and function: Change a careful cyclist into a sentence where carefully describes an action.
Use feedback: Improve one sentence after a partner says the adverb is unclear. Show the first and the improved version.
Speak clearly: Read a short self-written story to a partner. The partner notes whether the key actions and adverbs are easy to understand.

Lernnachweis

For a learning record, show these things:

A self-written story or description with 5–8 short sentences.
3–5 meaningful adverbs that fit the actions.
One visible improvement after feedback.
A short Can-do check.
A brief spoken reading or partner presentation if you want to speak; recording is not required.

The learning record should show your own language work. External media, scripts or uploads are not needed.

OERs zum Thema

Free images in this course come from Wikimedia Commons. Check the licence on each file page when you reuse an image.

The embedded grammar videos are from BBC Learning English on YouTube. Use the official embed; do not copy or re-upload the videos.

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